The Story of a World - Available on iOS

[Mårten Jonsson]

Hi

I just release my new game, The Story of a World today on iOS. It's an update on my entry for the 23:rd Ludum Dare, and it is based on the themes I like to make games about, exploration and choices. You can view it at http://www.jm-j.com/storyworld

[ghostwheel]

This looks really interesting! I think your games are very cool. I'm not sure why you're not getting more attention here.

[Michaël Samyn]

It's a lovely idea. But the graphics could be a lot better, I think.
I didn't like the white flash every time you add something. It seems so jarring. Maybe add a more gentle transition option?

[Mårten Jonsson]

Thank you very much ghostwheel:)

I like the transition that way, it shows that there's an impact to making choices.

[ghostwheel]

Yes, the graphics are a significant weakness. It's especially noticeable because so much rides on the quality of the art. It could use more subtle animations as well; swaying grass and leaves, moving clouds, etc.

[God at play]

Looking forward to checking this out over the next couple weeks. Hope to give some feedback then