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Author Topic: The Story of a World - Available on iOS  (Read 7958 times)
Mårten Jonsson

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« on: September 12, 2012, 11:40:18 PM »

Hi

I just release my new game, The Story of a World today on iOS. It's an update on my entry for the 23:rd Ludum Dare, and it is based on the themes I like to make games about, exploration and choices. You can view it at http://www.jm-j.com/storyworld
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ghostwheel

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« Reply #1 on: September 14, 2012, 06:25:30 PM »

This looks really interesting! I think your games are very cool. I'm not sure why you're not getting more attention here.
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Michaël Samyn

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« Reply #2 on: September 16, 2012, 09:40:57 AM »

It's a lovely idea. But the graphics could be a lot better, I think.
I didn't like the white flash every time you add something. It seems so jarring. Maybe add a more gentle transition option?
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Mårten Jonsson

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« Reply #3 on: September 17, 2012, 05:55:12 PM »

Thank you very much ghostwheel:)

I like the transition that way, it shows that there's an impact to making choices.
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« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 06:09:56 PM »

Yes, the graphics are a significant weakness. It's especially noticeable because so much rides on the quality of the art. It could use more subtle animations as well; swaying grass and leaves, moving clouds, etc.
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« Reply #5 on: October 06, 2012, 09:46:28 PM »

Looking forward to checking this out over the next couple weeks. Hope to give some feedback then Smiley
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